|Reviews for Wake|
| Catcher in the Rye 5/13/08 . chapter 1
| Madame Y 3/8/08 . chapter 1
I love the overall calm, dream-like atmosphere. Your poem flows wonderfully; I can imagine it as spoken word!
| smile for the sunshine 2/23/08 . chapter 1
really well written. i don't care if you were high on caffefine and lack of sleep, it was great. i think all of the literary elements you used complimented your piece wonderfully. only criticism i can think of is: shft enter to rid your piece of double spacing and making the lines even lengths (but neither are necessity.)
good work. ]
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| Dreaming Heavens 2/23/08 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this poem. At first, I was a bit hesistant, but after "euphoria" I was hooked. I loved the tone, especially the imagery that contributed significantly. That one sleepless, caffinated night really produced something great. Beautifully done!