Beautiful

I love the overall calm, dream-like atmosphere. Your poem flows wonderfully; I can imagine it as spoken word!

really well written. i don't care if you were high on caffefine and lack of sleep, it was great. i think all of the literary elements you used complimented your piece wonderfully. only criticism i can think of is: shft enter to rid your piece of double spacing and making the lines even lengths (but neither are necessity.)

good work. ]

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Wow, I really like this poem. At first, I was a bit hesistant, but after "euphoria" I was hooked. I loved the tone, especially the imagery that contributed significantly. That one sleepless, caffinated night really produced something great. Beautifully done!