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| Zonne 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abuseFun little piece. Good job. Maybe just some double spacing between paragraphs or thoughts to make it easier to read. |
| fatbird33 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseahh yes who hasn't done this? |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abusevery amusing story, i like it. keep it up! |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's cute ^^ Very realistic, I like it. You can just imagine the situation and everything fitting into place. Moon's Poetess |
| Sita Brightwind 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I liked it! |