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| HGiel 2008-04-14 ch 5,  | abuseYou are doing a great job with this. I'm enjoying the back and forth in time, good stuff! |
| demented cookies 2008-04-11 ch 5, | abuseawesome! i don't know what to talk about here, so i'm just going to say please PLEASE write more!! |
| bookworm-lovingedward 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abusethis is really great, I love it almost as much as I loved TFY, lol. keep updating! especially with TLY! |
| HGiel 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseHow sweet they could all bond over their sexuality lol Good work on the chapter! |
| demented cookies 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseoh cool! another chapter!! this one was fun, keep writing. |
| Myloveforyou 2008-03-18 ch 3, | abuseI love your character devolpment so far. Surrey is my favorit! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| demented cookies 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseyay! another AWESOME chapter! this rulz. keep writing!! |
| HGiel 2008-03-08 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter! I love cross dressers too~^^ |
| demented cookies 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abusewow...this is good! coolio! please keep writing! i love the subject. please continue! |
| HGiel 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abuseIt's just like a soap opera, I LOVE IT! I feel so badly for Addie~ It kind of reminds me of what happened to Luke on As The World Turns, are you a Nuke fan? Good job on this, I look forward to more! |
| Ramenluver 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abuseYay, flashback next! Just a few spelling errors, and I thought it was kinda molester-like that the doctor kept touching his shoulder. XD But otherwise, good. -Ramen |
| Ramenluver 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAw...poor Leo. :/ "Do you think the singer from AFI is hawt?" Rofl. I enjoyed it, and I think you did the part where he lost consciousness really well. :) Update soon, hon. -Ramen |
| HGiel 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseOriginal story and good writing, nice work! Keep it up! |