that was so wonderful. there was a certain rhythm about it that i liked...it was fluent almost like a song. i think you could have used some punctuation but all in all a lovely piece.

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This is quite possibly my favourite poem about love. The lack of punctuation at the end of verses and the lack of capital letters, deliberate or not, makes this poem about such a complex emotion seem so simple. I only wish this could have come from my thoughts.