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| cerasylvania 2008-09-06 ch 23, anon. | abusei loved them both i really do i spent all day and all night reading both stories of the freaky goth girl not going to sleep once because i had to know what happened next that is how good it is keep up the good work and never doubt yourself because you are an amazing writer. Sweet Crazy Em only the insane live free.-cerasylvania quote |
| n. paige 2008-09-02 ch 23,  | abuseI feel horrible that I haven't replied in so long! Just know that I've been reading and that I think you did an amazing job on this story! I'm going to always be a completely loyal reader for you! |
| Maria Gracia 2008-09-01 ch 23, | abuseI LOVED IT! All of it... but that ending... I cried... I just cant put into words how much I liked.. love this story... |
| sticks stones and TECHNO 2008-08-24 ch 23, | abuseOh no! It's over! *freaks out a fair amount* But at least it had a happy ending. :) I love the style of it. The characters are so unique, it's awesome how they seem so real through the past two stories. I love how they didn't even get all perfect-white-movie-styled for the wedding, especially for the vows. And the repetiton of freaky goth girl. And everything else! XD Yay, I was mentioned! :D Anyway, this was an amazing chapter. And story! I love how you write. Best of luck with all your stories yet to come, -sticks stones and TECHNO ♥ |
| betharooni 2008-08-24 ch 23, | abuseYAY HAPPY ENDING! Don't we all love happy endings? Okay, you'll have to describe to me in full detail every miniscule thing about that wedding. I love the bride's bouquet, and the vows! :) Okey-dokey love, thanks for the most amazingwonderful stories ever! Love ya! ~Beth ♥ |
| Jevanminx 2008-08-24 ch 23, | abuseI love the she had black roses, much nicer than anything else, and I also love the use of the title link at the end of there vows. Brilliant, I loved it, well done on two brilliant stories. JM |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-08-24 ch 23, | abuseIm cry. those are the weirdest vows any one could think up...i hope they arent yours for when you get married HEHE. um um um um...write sdome tihng else...i miss you already heehee write some thing as good as this ok...THANK YOU! |
| Kairos K 2008-08-24 ch 23, | abuseI have to say that I suck at writing romances. But this is the best and funniest one that I've read in the longest time. You've managed to horrify me, make me want to cry, make me want to beat some of the characters over the head, and be really happy. I just think you need to add some more explicit scenes. Anyways. I think you should try to get this one and the previous one actually published with a publishing company. Really very funny and a worth while read. |
| Unsociably Acceptable 2008-08-23 ch 23, | abuseblah, that was a mouthful! hahahahaha, go lali, i hope you have a happy life with your prep! xDD |
| betharooni 2008-08-22 ch 22, | abusewhe! A quick update! :D Aw, how romantic, a hand shake! Well, I guess they already had that gets-down-on-his-knees moment in the hotel lobby. Oh noes, it's almost over! How unfortunate! Oh well, let's see what else can come out of that insane mind of yours. ;) I wanna see Campbell! Okay my precious, have a happy three more days of summer! :( ~Beth ♥ |
| Stella Celestial 2008-08-22 ch 22, | abuseShe finally said yes! Oh my god I thought that I would have to kill her for not answering the answer that she wanted. I just wish that you would at least show us the wedding and tell us where the huney-moon is. god knows we don't want to read that tripple x rated scene. =P anyways please please please please please please please please please please please please write another chapter and an epilogue. I want to read more of their romance. it's so dramatic! |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-08-22 ch 22, | abuseaw i love it...i aodre oyu but i dont want it to come to and end other wise i will hate you...you better write loads more tinhg coz them i can adore you again ok |
| Jevanminx 2008-08-22 ch 22, | abuseAw yay, go Lali, she can have that cookie now. JM |
| sticks stones and TECHNO 2008-08-21 ch 22, | abuseOh no! It's almost over! But yay! She's engaged to Hamby! About time. :P "Good girl Lali. You deserve a cookie." Made me laugh. She DOES deserve a cookie after all of this. Good chapter, I liked it. :D |
| Unsociably Acceptable 2008-08-21 ch 22, | abusehaha wow, that was fast xD but, i'm not so surprised seeing as its lali...>.> |