That was great! I thought it was her husband then I found it was Robert and I thought she was just still in the dark.. haha.. I was laughing thinking she hd shot the wrong couple lol.. Then I found out it was all planned. Perfect ending.. kept me guessing.. Big fan of your HP stories btw.. Keep up the good work.

Oh! Hey, that's mean.
I really enjoyed reading this, however the wife was a tad unrealistic. I was confused at first, thinking she shot her husband and then he was still alive. Must have missed somthing.
Nicely done, good plot construction. Thanks for this, made me smile a bit.

Hi!

I'm a fan from and saw the link from your pro and decided to check it out. I liked it. I'm a fan of stuff like this, sepcially when it's set around Boston. 'Cause I love that dirty water! OOh Boston you're my home dun dun dun dun dun. Sorry couldn't resist. Soy un gran afficienado de los Red Sox. (Um I don't know how different Spanish is from Portuguese but that says I'm a big fan of the Red Sox. :-) Go Sox!

Again sorry about the Boston plug. It was really good and I think that you've potential to be a Mystery writer. I grew up reading mystery stories, Nancy Drew, the Hardy Boys, Trixie Belden, and now Robert B. Parker when I'm not too busy with homework, Harry Potter, my friends, life, The Twilight series, and other stuff. I love mysteries and am slightly curious. Is the BPD gonna nail the bastard? umm... i'm not big on handing out contact info over the web to someone living in Brazil so just answer it in one of ur harry potter stories in an AN. You don't have to but it would be nice. No offence on the living in Brazil thing, it's just that I don't feel comfortable about sharing that kind of information.

Gibby101