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aprettywar
2008-09-24
ch 1, 		abusei thought the way you used parenthesis to separate the haikus was really interesting. i think you've got something really good here. keep up the wonderful work!
WildRoseThorn
2008-04-01
ch 1, 		abuseI haven't read this one either! Geez...Are the parentheses part of the poem or just to indicate new stanzas?
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