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| The Toothpaste Fiend 2008-10-06 ch 5,  | abuseYou! Lol, was randomly browing and stumbled on this. Okay, so for some reason, this reminds me of this TV show that was on over here, called Lost in Austen. Google it, if you can. I personally, thought it was muy good. And Mr Bingley...drool! Okay, side tracking. Love the story, love the characters, and love you. Muwah! Lol. (Too much sugar) |
| TuneOut 2008-07-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is intriguing. I wish you would continue because Guy seems mysterious and has the greatest potential to be sleazy. I'm interested by the relationship between Elly and Abby. While the other two seem to heed to Abby's beck and call, Elly seems to be stronger internally and it seems like they would have conflicts. Your writing is excellent. |
| PandaPanda 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseI like the theme you set on this story, decrypting possible hidden messages behind good-ole classics. It seems very promising. |
| Snowbabykoala 2008-06-11 ch 2, | abuseI like how the story is going so far.. (: update soon! |
| InSilverShadows 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseI have thus been entreated. XD Again, like I said, I really enjoy your word choice and sentence structure as it contributes to the overall feel of the story. It's like a modern-day Pride and Prejudice, or Little Women. :P |
| InSilverShadows 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThanks so much for the review! X3 (P.S.: Pushing Daisies IS pretty rad.) Your stories sound so charming. I like the romance-novel feel with the modern diction. :P |
| King Patch 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseI am shivering in delight at such a delightful golddiggers' tale. Keep it upz! |
| Momiji K. Sohma 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseBah, that made my head spin. o.O -Confuzzed- -Tries to think of something nice to say about it with confussing myself- o.o; It was all... gramatically correct? :3 |
| Written 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuseinteresting, and different :) please keep writing, I like it so far. |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuseVery funny! I love the control Abby has over her friends... I actually find the whole dynamic very interesting and hope you do a lot about them. Update soon. |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm sure you know by now that I like your writing-- I'm just confused! Does she love him, his money, or is he really some kind of real estate agent? |
| LadyMred 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuse:D I like it (: |