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| artonalpha 2008-09-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat concept, you have the start of what could be an awesome story or even a novel. I hope you plan on continuing this. the plot could go in any number of directions. |
| Lady1369 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! Were you planning on continuing it? |
| cyanidecandy 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseamazing :) it's so original ! lefty and righty descriminations eh. can u imagine if it really happened .. what a screwed up world we'd be living in =S just wondering , is this a one-shot or a developing story ? just in case i'll put u on my alert list anyway :) |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like the plot, very original. I hope you update soon! |
| Lackadaisical 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThis story is something I am adding to my favorites... I like where it is going, you are doing a GREAT job! ~Rouge~ |
| Zeta Joon 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot, actually! My only small suggestion: "malfeasance" means small offence--not something that would be punishable by death. |