Reviews for Seven Tips on How to Die

Reviews For: Seven Tips on How to Die

mjank 2008-07-10 ch 1,	abusevery interesting...I was thinking about that movie "Seven" when I was reading it. I like how all the seemingly separate events all tied together at the end. I have to ask though was it all a dream or was this happening in reality?..either way you told it very well.
Dark Dementium 2008-06-26 ch 1,	abuseWow...quite interesting story if I do say so myself. The whole premise around it was fantastic, especially the ending. It also puts out a good message, that you should never take anything in the world for granted. I also love your writing style. It's very different, and you don't mosey off into excruciating detail. You give just enough detail to make a point, and not confuse the reader. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your work!
danielradcliffesgf 2008-06-16 ch 1,	abuseWhoa, sweet! Hehe. That was a big twist at the end. I liked it a lot. Keep writing, please!
ShockingReality 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseHaha..."textual intercourse". Well-written, I enjoyed it
Vost Thenen 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abuseCool, cool, cool, cool. It's not very often at all that I am blindsided by an ending, and pleasantly so, but this was great. All of a sudden a lot of things clicked together and it was, well 'magnificent.' This was a great story before the end, and with it it's a damn perfect story. Well done.
KoFBoT 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseEnjoyable. I rather liked the ending. ^o^
xx 3DD Fan 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseI didn't really appreciate the comment on overweight people (I am not overweight, but I found it very harsh. Be in an overweight person's sheos and then maybe you will understand what feels like). Other than that, good story!
deirdrekayyy 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! I loved it. It was great how everything came together in the end!
2008-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, interesting. It was definitely suspenseful, and I found it really well written and catching. I was confused by one bit, where the bits in first person Jeffery's thoughts? If so, maybe it would work better if they were in italics, because for a while I thought there were three boys. Or maybe i jsut wasn't reading closely enough. But it was really funny, too, some of the lines - "Hey, does this rag smell like chloroform to you?" They were what really defined the character.
WanderingLeprechaun 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abusethat's going to keep me up all night! It was good, something I didn't expect. I'm guessing the seven deadly sins, which makes me start to think that you're at least Christian, if not Catholic.( you know, with the "peace" and all. Just makes me think that way) Really liked it. Gotta ask why all your main characters seem to be perverted and or overly cocky. seems more of a reflection of the author... or just a bad habit. MR
Luminaerie 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was amazing. Reminded me of the Seven Deadly Sins. I really liked how you switched from 3rd person to 1st, so that we knew what he was thinking and what was actually happening in an organized way. I loved the way you presented this, and the description. Great job! :]
okami2305 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseHa-sweet. I liked it. Really good writing style too, good job. THe boy, Jeffery, fit his character perfectly.

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