its cool ...update soon

I still think you should've finished the first on 1st, and then rewritten it, but the new version is pretty good! You better finish it this time! XD

hm... I liked it better when she was from america and didn't know who he was for a while :P

hi! i didn't read the original Royal Pains before, so i'm going to start with this. I like Kristen's character! she's so loud spoken and isn't scared of anything. i like how she stood up to James, who is the prince. :D
can't wait to read the next chapters, and how james goes about finding her again!

i don't remember the first story so the re-write is good.

Oh this is cool. I love Kristens attitude, and of course he can do anything, feel the power people, hehehe.
JM

cool rewrite. i think it's going to be funny! good luck

I read the old one, and the plot was pretty going well (except that it is too fast). This one's a lot better with just a right amount of descriptions.

It's a different plot from the other one now. The other one, they met when they bumped each other, and now this - they met in a bedroom LOL.

I kinda liked the idea of the first one you did, where Kristen actually found out that he's the prince in the later parts of the story, unlike here when she already finds out in chapter one. But the writing style is so much better now.

Be careful though that sometimes you tend to go too fast in the story. It wouldn't hurt building up the characters a bit initially.

Take care,

- hiro

OH. MY GOSH. YAY!! YOU UPDATED!! WOOHOO!! I'M LOVING THIS STORY ALREADY!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! I LOVE THE REWRITE!! IT'S MORE DETAILED!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! I CAN'T WAIT!!