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| Life In Heaven 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseI thought this was a really sweet poem, especially the ending. I also liked the Chinese characters in between the different poem chunks. The description of the poem definatly drew me to it, though next time maybe make the description different from the title? Well done & keep writing. :D |