I like the humour. And the serious undertone.

Reminiscent. I like the sweetness of simplicity here.

I like the quiet optimism this piece exudes. And the idea of making rainbows where officially there are none.

Sense of calmness and acceptance. Like the use of words in teh last line.

This is so beautiful in its simplicity :) This poem reminds me of a poem called Dawn by Paul Laurence Dunbar--both of you describe dusk and dawn so beautifully, kind of like a lullaby>

I love how the sky is personified; when you said Heaven's eyelids droop, it made me think of sunsets and how it really does look like Heaven is slowly closing its eyes o.O

Anyway, this is definitely a favorite and I can't wait for more hiccups!

P.S. The chipmunk made me squeal ;)