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| helixdown 2008-03-23 ch 3, | abuseWow, that was really interesting, good background story, its really, well, good. Yeah, can't really say much more than that, keep up the good work! |
| helixdown 2008-03-09 ch 2, | abuseThat was really good, but the last part was kinda confusing. I guess the whole reason for that is too keep me interested so you can clarify it later though, thanks for the update and keep up the good work! |
| helixdown 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHey, thanks for the review, love it. The chapter really captivates the reader and the idea is original (as far as i know), so i'd say good job. Keep up the good work and update soon please! (unless your not going to, then i'd appreciate it if you told me so) |
| The Sun and Shadow 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed the beginning, when Thanos goes to the Echo Side for the first time (The desert scene really caught my attention and dragged me in). You described Thanos very well. I have a clear vision of him in my mind. Good job there. I think the whole idea of the "Echo Side" is really creative as well. The storyline is a little confusing, but perhaps future chapters will clear this up. I will certainly be on the lookout for updates. |