Nice job with the rhyming. You described the story very well. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

Amazingly voiced.
Very adequately written.
I can honestly say I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
I know the feeling, oh so well, and know exactly what you must be going through. Not alot of fun, is it.
Anyways, keep up writing.

Keep your head high.*--

it was done very well, and i see you posted another so i guress they didnt kill you. something doesnt flow right in a few minor spots but i cant put my finger on it... if i do i will notify you but otherwise very nice :)

Aw that was sad and sweet. I loved the rhyming, and the discription in the poem! Well done!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥

i sorta suspected this a long time ago,
but you always assure me its not true,
so i was trying to believe you.

nice job.

and...


good lick.

Yeah, those thoughts sound pretty familiar.

I like this one... my ex boyfriend constantly asks me how I got over him while his other ex girlfriends can't... Kind of the same but much much different at the same time.

-stix-

:) well we wouldnt want you to get no reviews. I have had the same problem though... hang in there

Well I hope no one kills you... lol

I loved the line "Our friendship sends out shock waves." and the last line... that was really great and the rhyming was nice too

I'm not a big fan of how in the beginning you have some lines together and then you go back to double spacing.. I might pick one or the other and do it for the whole piece

Anyhow a really great job.. something I can really relate too

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile

lol. i no that feeling