Reviews for Wine, Woes and Weddings

Reviews For: Wine, Woes and Weddings

substitute angel 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseHey, it's me again, Lacy. I see you've made a ton of changes to your page, but I guess its all for the best. I really enjoyed reading this. It was short, well written, and there was a touch of comedy as well. I also really like the title you've given this. I wish I'd seen it earlier, but I've sort of been awol on fiction press for a while what with finals and all that. But those are all over now. Good work.
Entice 2008-04-21 ch 2,	abusewell that just sucks dosent it?
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin... 2008-04-21 ch 2,	abuseOh dear, oh dear... This is not good, no? Lots of updates from you, my dear! cheers I'm a little confused as to why Gabe was angry. I can understand that he wouldn't appreciate her snooping, but I still thing that he would have maintained his cool smugness and delighted in scaring the bejeepers out of her and then laughed at it, rather than been all serious. I dunno... I don't know Gabe that well. Anyway, nice update and expansion on what was here earlier. thumbs up ~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-19 ch 2,	abuseHi! Wonderful story. I stumbled upon it just now. Great chapter. Cant wait to read about where this is going. Update soon!
criti-sized 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseI've been trying to get around to reviewing you for all your stories for awhile now. And it seems that the only time I'm able to actually review people is when I'm in class, lol. "...with pearls on my earlobes and around my throat." I couldn't help but think this sounded sarcastically nice. Well, this was interesting. Though I have to say it was as captivating as your other stories, I liked the slight wit and banter in it. Amelia comes off as a slightly introverted person, and Nick is definitely whacky, lol. C.S.
Written 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseawesome start! I think it's absolutely fabulous how you laid out the beginning- giving us enough details to understand what was going on and what her family was like, but also without infodumping at us. I can't wait to read more, so please do continue :)
Mosaic Stains 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abuseWell, I'm always up for a short story and I'm glad you decided to post up something new! Now, to the real review. The beginning of the story was pretty nice. Of course, naturally I felt sorry for Amelia being put in the circumstances that she is in. What with all of the jovial criticism and welcoming air of pride for who she is and what she does. Nick sounds like an okay character so far... You knowm, while reading this I suddenly came to the realization that I just don't find it appealing to have male characters with green or blue eyes... Hum... Nothing personal against your male character, it's just something I noticed. I suppose it's mostly because I read stories all the time where the male characters have light eyes and I happen to find dark eyes-- brown to be percise-- appealing. But getting back to the story, I'm going to guess and put that Nick obviously knows who she is and that their parents-- hers more to say-- are trying to get them together, which happens... Straight-- understood... Well, my only criticism is you tend to change tense often within this chapter, and simply need to watch out for that. Besides that-- sounds redundant; my that-- I'm curious to see what happens because we all know the overall outcome. So keep it coming, okay-- that is whenever you can! ~M.Stains
Danielle Thamasa 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseAfter reading this chapter and checking out the reviews thus far for it, I have to say I agree with them. This is an amazing beginning to the story. It is laid out so well and the characters are beautifully written. I can't wait to read the next part of this. Excellent work. Danielle Thamasa
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin... 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseChristmas in February! This was nice. I loved the description of the party and the many complaints. Write what you know, I've heard, and you have done so superbly. I liked your summary. It drew me in and it was magic from there. The characters are great so far... I want to know more about them! I want more! I want more! thumbs up ~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Georgianna 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseThere is something really attractive about this story
jekodama 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseGo, Maj, GO! I LIKE it! you sure about making it a short one? And thank you, Ferrett, for encouraging her to write it!
Tatiana Moore 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseHey Itse! I was excited to read something new from you! I liked this too and look forward to reading more. When you say that it's a three part story--do you mean three chapters? Was this part one? Anyway... i'm glad to see that you're writing even with your crazy busy semester load. Take care!
The Ferrett 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseWe all know how much I enjoyed it word for word. You rock girl!

Return to Top