|Reviews for Abortion|
| Purple Lemonade 5/29/12 . chapter 1
This is great and moving. I'm strongly pro-life. Does the woman kill herself at the end? So sad, but you,ve "redeamed" her.
| julie 1/13/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that's really disgusting. Pro-life my ass.
| flawlessangel08 4/26/08 . chapter 1
I like how this poem considers both woman and child. Although I am pro-choice I still like this because while it says abortion is bad it shows the affect it has on the woman which I believe is good because many people do not care about the mother at all, only the baby. Good job.
| relapse into change 2/26/08 . chapter 1
i'm not exactly sure if this is against abortion or for it but i'm pretty sure it's prolife so against abortion so if it is . . .
i use to think this way, i really did. i thought abortion was wrong becuase you were killing something that had so much fucking potiential and deserved to live (because really who doesn't?) but i guess, i just don't care anymore...? it's just. . . why would you let a baby be born if you know all that happens is it's going to suffer or die anyway, what's the point?
but...anyway sorry for ranting..i liked this though even if i don't agree with it. i think it has a potienial to be a really good song.
| Vanilla Tea 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow...this is just great. its so well written, and it flows consistently. the only thing though is in the stanza you keep repeating, in the second to last line i think it should be "your", because it doesnt make sense otherwise but its like that every time the stanza is repeated. great job anyway, this is amazing!
-SB, review marathon
| The Digital Damsel 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Wow. I had a difficult time breathing after I read this. It's so harsh, but I love it. It's like, somebody finally came out and said something so truely pro-life instead of just pussy-footing around it, but in such a beautifully poetic way. It clashes. It's dis-harmonius.
| fatbird33 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Pro LIFE! hells ya! good work.
| Zonne 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Tough subject. Lot of pain came through. Evoking emotions has its risk, as do all things. Good job. Keep writing and do try to cheer up.