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Reviews For: Sunset Suicide
Lil Indian girrl 2008-02-26 . chapter 1
OMG! It's a master piece! :D
I love it, in everyway. I liked how
she said
"No, I am not a whiny teenager trying to get attention. I’m merely a writer"
Five stars! ;)
sticks stones and TECHNO 2008-02-24 . chapter 1
That gave me chills.
It was very good.
artificial destiny 2008-02-24 . chapter 1
goodness that was great.
not that i usually read morbid/suicide related stories
but it really REALly made me think ya know?

and i cant help wondering why she couldnt just have spiritually killed herself. as in killing the old you. because thats what everyone does. just not so consciously. If she could kill the old her that she so despised and felt no one cared about in the fake world, couldnt she have avoided it?

but thats just my thoughts about it. really, the way you wove the plot was... well i dont think it could have been done much better :D

-artificial destiny
if you want, pls r/r back!
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