Such an interesting story, uniquely told. The writing itself is a little rough, but I really like the tale. I guess if I had to be honest I'm a bit into the darker side of things. Good thread! Sun

Really excellent :)

i liked the idea/plot.

one thing about it that could be improved is the way you develop it? like, build the story up so the ending is that much more sad/sorrowful. or perhaps, tie the narrator to the story/why shes telling the story

well, i hope this review helps :)

pls r/r back!

-artificial destiny