| Reviews for Blood on Snow |
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The Sun and Shadow 2/24/08 . chapter 1Such an interesting story, uniquely told. The writing itself is a little rough, but I really like the tale. I guess if I had to be honest I'm a bit into the darker side of things. Good thread! Sun |
Steve Sweeney 2/24/08 . chapter 1Really excellent :) |
artificial destiny 2/24/08 . chapter 1i liked the idea/plot. one thing about it that could be improved is the way you develop it? like, build the story up so the ending is that much more sad/sorrowful. or perhaps, tie the narrator to the story/why shes telling the story well, i hope this review helps :) pls r/r back! -artificial destiny |