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| Basara 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abusesharing thought of love... nice... |
| Xavier Ewald 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseit's not a haiku, sure, but it's solid. i found my own little meaning in it. that's what poetry's about, right? p.s. panda bear rocks! |
| Kicking Poe 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI think it's more fun to break haiku rules anyway:) there's a sweet, childish-love feel to this, with the "one for you, one for me" line, which makes december seem rather more inhabitable and cozy than normal. and I probably didn't catch any of the meaning you had in mind, but it did touch something inside me. cheers. |
| doctor's diagnosis 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI don't get it, but I don't think I'm supposed to. The secret hidden in that "december" is yours. And yeah, haiku is 5-7-5, generally, but I like this all the same. |