Reviews for Suicide Note a Poem

Zonne 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseSad but good.
Vost Thenen 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseA good kind of raw hook to it, but it lacks rhythmn in some spots. Try reading it aloud and see how it flows. Good sense of rhyme scheme in here though and definitely dramatic. Oh, and Poetry is in quotations, not underlined when it's the title.