Reviews for The Ship and the Maelstrom

Jonathan Bitter-Sweet
2008-06-18
ch 1,

abuseKind of bitter.
There seems to be love, but not the most purest kind.
Great diction.
The imagery is great too.
"The Ship and the Maelstrom."

smile for the sunshine
2008-02-24
ch 1,

abuselovely poem but a few grammatical errors: it's should be its and tick tocking should be hyphenated. other than that i thought it was beautiful. it was a sophiscated way of portraying weakness in love. words like "epitome" and "epiphany" help to give it that appearance. word choice: wonderful. story: beautiful. poem: well written.

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