Oh my gosh!
I seriously didn't know you were this good at poetry! This was so...descriptive and imaginative. The words flowed extremely nicely. I lurved it =]

Lovelovelove

I loved this. I loved the way you used your words. Great job!

i really liked it :]

Nice poem Very emotional

wow that was pretty good, i was a little confused at first then i fugared it out. well any way it was really good!! keep writing

~ziploc~