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xxvisionaryxx
2008-04-26
ch 11,
abuseThat whole thing at the end of this chapter about him being unattainable was unbelievable. He was the one who'd just said he loved her, she should know that. Maybe you could change her fears to something about the relationship not being accepted by peers or something, because clearly, Jordan Candles is attainable.

Good job on everything else
V
xxvisionaryxx
2008-03-25
ch 11, anon.
abuseThe reference to Edward Cullen made me laugh so much. I really like this story.
misery sister
2008-03-25
ch 10,
abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D
Kim W
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseO, in medias res. You picked a good starting point for the story. You managed to introduce all the characters in the middle of the story; I love when a writer can do that.
animefreakgirl
2008-03-22
ch 9,
abuse*New Reader*
Wow...this is really an interesting story. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter to see what's going to happen with Jordan and Hannah. (:
xxvisionaryxx
2008-03-22
ch 9,
abuseHey, I really like this. It's slightly over-dramatic and very suspenseful, but it's still good. It's an interesting romance.
HGiel
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseFun story so far, keep it up~
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