I like the freedom in this poem. It's just... overflowing in your words. It makes me want to run or fly or something weird like that, haha. But it's filled with just this yearning that makes me ache at the same time. I didn't really love the last few lines. They're cliche compared to the rest of the poem. Otherwise, I liked this poem a lot!

Adorable.

-C.K.

I really like the language you use in this piece, and i like what its about.

good job, this is really creative and flows well, kind of like a cross between a song and a poem

nice :)

Aw, this is soo cute xD I really love this!