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| Tragically Charismatic 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I really like the imagery, and the way you tell the story. With this line you went from past tense to present [she’s scared to death] but other than that this was absolutely perfect! It's so true.. I love your work. And you. =) xx |