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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuse"his face was shown in the waves," probably my favorite line in this was hands-down a defining moment in this remarkable piece of free verse. This wasn't the most original situation that I've seen on FictionPress, but it still delivers strong emotion, especially in the last four lines. You really did a great job with this poem. Thumbs-up. |