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Reviews For: Wishing Upon Stars

fatbird33
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abusegreat message. and this might sound weird, but i loved the summary, super cool
Basara
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abusewhen thinking of that... one would never be good enough...

nice...
Dormio
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseReally nice. I always enjoy reading your poetry and especially your haikus. But maybe you can make 3 seperate sentences in stead of 1 really big one. That makes the whole thing sound different you know.
Faith Adeline
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusevery good. simple but strong. keep it up!
Faith
lost for words
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseI like the sadness and quiet intensity here. Great haiku.
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