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| fatbird33 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abusegreat message. and this might sound weird, but i loved the summary, super cool |
| Basara 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusewhen thinking of that... one would never be good enough... nice... |
| Dormio 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseReally nice. I always enjoy reading your poetry and especially your haikus. But maybe you can make 3 seperate sentences in stead of 1 really big one. That makes the whole thing sound different you know. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusevery good. simple but strong. keep it up! Faith |
| lost for words 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the sadness and quiet intensity here. Great haiku. |