|Reviews for Complexities|
| a certain slant of light 3/5/08 . chapter 1
Dream in the dark... yeah. I love the dark. Dream is what I do, although I'm not really disappointed when they don't come true - I mean, how could they?
| paradigm se7en 2/25/08 . chapter 1
all curious now, what do you dream, in the dark?
Nitpick first - it feels a little - unfinished? - yes, that's the word. Feels like there should be something more after this. Like the story's just begun.
Overall, though, I like this poem - like the flow of it, the structure and the wordplay. :)