Dream in the dark... yeah. I love the dark. Dream is what I do, although I'm not really disappointed when they don't come true - I mean, how could they?

all curious now, what do you dream, in the dark?

Nitpick first - it feels a little - unfinished? - yes, that's the word. Feels like there should be something more after this. Like the story's just begun.

Overall, though, I like this poem - like the flow of it, the structure and the wordplay. :)