|Reviews for The Oblivion|
| XxFallenxX 3/13/08 . chapter 1
It kills you because for you, he’s everlasting, but he’s not yours – he’ll never be yours to save.
oh my god, that was so beautiful.
i loved it.
you're got a way with words, you do.
| whisperhello 2/26/08 . chapter 1
Wow. I really loved this piece. It's beautiful. Your phrasing and eloquence is brilliant. I especially love the lines:
'you can either choose to fall headfirst into its eternal depths or resist its decadent allure.'
and 'He could be a holiday boy, a once-upon-a-midnight-dream boy, a weekend boy, or the unfortunate-struggle-of-knowing-you-always boy, but he’ll be immortalised as the boy with diamond eyes, of tugging grins; the forever kind.'
I honestly cannot begin to describe the magnficent effect this had on me. It's poetic and poingant and is just wonderful.
| LiME-GREEN-CAPES 2/25/08 . chapter 1
breathtaking :] i loved it