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| fatbird33 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusei liked the conversational effect, but the last line could've been more powerful i think. yay review marathon. |
| Glowing Aura 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautifilly written and the story itself is sweet. I'm actually a little jealous at how smooth and naturally the ryhming goes. Anyway, I can kind of relate to this. I think everyone can, actually. I know I've had some of these more than once... Anyway, lovely job on a lovely poem for a lovely holiday. |