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| LAYD.M 2008-07-03 ch 9,  | abuseI think this is my favorite story you wrote. Don't get me wrong, I love the others ones you wrote, just that this one is really good. |
| Anne Anne 2008-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse(I think it's just me) I had to read this chapter twice, well the first half about 3. It was a bit of a hard read (for me). There's a hint of magic/etc in the chapter, is there? |
| Mrs. Jim Halpert 2008-04-08 ch 9, | abusei like this story. reminds me of home torn. keep up the good work and update ASAP! |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-04-07 ch 6, | abuseoh where are you? Me, Boring? chapter(s) please? |
| malloluvsya 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad you updated! I love this fic, and I can't wait to see what happens. Sorry to be so short, but I'm in a hurry. I love Cheyenne and Jordan's relationship. |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-03-31 ch 9, | abuseaw no more? |
| deny.me.not 2008-03-31 ch 9, | abuseOh god, I would die if I had a mother like Grace, she's just a really disappointing mother. I love the interaction between Jordon and Cheyenne. -dmn. |
| C. Chen 2008-03-31 ch 9, | abuseThis is one of my favorite pieces from you. it really has a mystical quality and the characters are well developed right from the start without as much text as you've used before. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter =) |
| Rina 2008-03-31 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm really getting into this story now. There are so many unanswered questions and mysteries, can't wait to see what will eventuate. |
| Secret Heart01 2008-03-31 ch 9, | abuse“That’s now what you said.” shouldn't it be "not" ? Hmm ... This chapter seems like it's stalling something big ... as if at an impasse. Well, can't wait to see what will happen next :) |
| katieee 2008-03-31 ch 9, | abuseCheyenne had seen her mother. Her mother had seen her. :/ I don't know if that's a good or bad thing. But what I do know is that I liked the moment between Cheyenne and Jordan. I extremely dislike their mother. She seems like she thinks that she owns the world. I don't like that. I like how Jordan answered her. :] I really like him. |
| kittyfd13 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseplease don't put this one on the shelf |
| malloluvsya 2008-03-02 ch 8, | abuseThis is one of your best stories, in my opinion. I really love the relationship between Jordan and Cheyenne. Matt seems like a cool guy, but I loathe all the girls that Jordan hangs with, or that want to hang with Jordan/Matt. Haha. |
| luella.SO 2008-03-02 ch 8, | abusehaha i laugh every time i read "the dancing stilleg" i have a really funny picture lol. does it mean anything? i'm so glad cheyenne got out to town, it seems she and matt had a really good relationship. and i LOVE how cody couldn't stop mentioning cheyenne whenever he talk to mallory or the horses. so cute. i hope cody and cheyenne meet up again soon, and that it bodes well! xo ella |
| katieee 2008-03-02 ch 8, | abuseYou don't disappoint. :] Bahahah. Im glad that Cheyenne went out with them. But I'm said that she's 'slipping away' slowly from them. I don't know what that means, but it makes me sad. |