|Reviews for The Star Runners|
| Wolfcry-Sama 6/6/08 . chapter 8
No! Fluffla! How sad... -cries-
-hugs Howl- I luv the wolf anyway...!
Sorry I haven't been on! I was grounded, but the story is really picking up and I'm mad I wasn't on to read your chapters when they were first posted.
| Wolfcry-Sama 4/1/08 . chapter 5
What an interesting story! I love it so far. Keep writing it! Oh, I know, I'll fave you! Oh, and have you read the Warriors series by Erin Hunter? It sounds a lot like it, but the story is so original.
| Heatless Flame 2/28/08 . chapter 1
First off, avoid putting paragraphs in such huge blocks. It can throw off any reader.
A bit of an infodump *sigh*, but trhe backstory is fairly interesting.
Shes been alive for two weeks, and she already has every prophet and his uncle's opinion on them? Chuck destiny and prophecy out the window, please.