Omg yay! you wrote more! lol I'm glad you wrote more as you can tell. I haven't read anything that good lately. Hmm. Anyway, loved this chapter and thanks for the special thanks. -_-" it must be annoying to have me change my pen name all the time lol. ok ttyl! good work!

~Autumn Lace Sawyer~

Yeah, I tend to change my Penname a lot. It's nice that you pay attention. I love this chapet. I love it a lot.

AH! This is really good I can't wait for the rest of it. (Secretly I'm hoping to how do you say dig deeper into Mark's mind about his past, and then have him and Mina get together).

Oh, I love that chapter. And the thing with writer's block, I so know what you mean. I hate it. but good job on this chapter. i know you'll get something new.

i don't care if their short. your stories rock! keep it up

aww how sad, plz update.

Awesome! I like this too. good work.

i really really like this so far. your first chapter of the story really grabbed my attention. excellent character analysis. you described them pretty well. good work!

Good work. I like this story.

O. I like this. It seems to have a good plot and great potential. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next update.

Ooh! It sounds intriguing. I always have trouble commenting on first chapters, because it's so hard to judge a story by them. However, yours seems very captivating. Keep writing!