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| Simon L. Dosley 2008-02-25 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. I especially loved the 'unbinding me, rewinding me, reminding me' part. The descriptions are very imaginative (clocks clicked memories behind locks) and paint great pictures for the reader. Great job. |