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| Emerald Pixie 2008-08-29 ch 7,  | abuseI am yet again amused by the antics of your characters. I love poetry as well and I'm glad that Stella is going to the poetry club! Although, I must say that Stella's spontaneous poetry was a bit silly. :) -Emerald Pixie |
| Emerald Pixie 2008-08-28 ch 6, | abuseThis was a funny and interesting chapter. I continue to see grammer/spelling mistakes but the overall read was very enjoyable. -Emerald Pixie |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 7, | abuse-wails- NO! -sighs- Well, hope you have fun, and update as soon as you get back...now I can't stop reading this...XD |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 6, | abuseInsanity is fun. Hand-knitted scarves are totally squishie! |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 5, | abuseAWE-some! Go Mollie! :D Haha, Mr. Fore "got properly...owned..." XD ~Fort |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 4, | abuseAgain, a couple spelling issues. D: SQUISHIE! I ♥ this story. :D -roots- Go FRESHMEN! WO! Well, see, now somebody else reads this...And, no, unfortunately I don't get the whole "GoRHS" joke thing...heh... ~Fortie |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 3, | abuseOh my gosh, I just laughed like the whole way through this... "SQUISHIE!" I'm seriously gonna try that, see what happens. :D It sounds like a fun class. I wish my classes were that fun. |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseYou have a few spelling issues, but otherwise it's great. Dang, Stella's hyper...:D |
| AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseI think I might be allergic to mornings too...:D This is awesome, keep it up! |
| Zoobs 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseLawl. Great start. Very energetic. Too tired to read it all though. Also, should go back to studying for finals, heh. But if you're going to mispell 'psychic' spell it like -> psikick just to avoid confusion. Have fun. |
| FleeingSoul 2008-04-15 ch 5, | abuseGood job! Please continue. I want to learn about Joe and if there is any truth to what the popular girls were gossiping about. |
| Emerald Pixie 2008-04-09 ch 4, | abuseI'm a fan and I exist (referring to your last comment)! So they have a plan now... I could see the seniors ripping off those posters. Stella is my favorite character so far! ^_^ |
| Emerald Pixie 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseActually, the whoe squishie thing is hilarious to me. I loved the whole SCHISM thing too. Tres amusante. Eh... need accent mark for tres... oh well. Anyway, still an interesting story. By the way, something picky, but "alot" is incorrect and should be spelled "a lot". Sorry, that was in chapter two and it kind of bothered me. Anyway, still very humorous. |
| Emerald Pixie 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseInteresting, yet again! This is funny so far. I could totally see you screaming out "Chapter title!" and having everyone in the cafeteria stare at you. Hilarious! |
| Emerald Pixie 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI can already tell this is going to be hilarious. Great first chapter. Peace! |