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Twist Their Emotions 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseLovely. The lines "Silhouette of shadows cast their wicked eyes/As they start serenading haunting lullabies" were beautiful. The imagery was amazing. Absolutely lovely.
Breaks-like-crystal 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuseI like this poem. There are aspects of it I can relate to as well. I like the words 'haunting lullabies' and the line 'the melody sounding so sweet, in reality is cursed'
BahamutsTear 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseWow...you sound extremely confused emotionally. I love your work, sends deep images of your soul onto the page. I've read many of your work. Lots of it is you wanting to be yourself and not be false, it's a beautiful cry. Maybe your emotions are torn asunder by your belief. You mentioned Sin and being deceived... maybe more analyzing of that might show you some truth.
jrsparkus 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abusenot the best one (because in my opinion, all poems excluding haikus should rhyme), but i like it all the same. ever thought of getting some of your poems together and publishing them? i plan on showing one of my friends uncle (a publisher) my plan after i'm done putting more poems in it and organizing thoughts.
VanFanel3 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseLove the word style in this one. I'm always a sucker for paradoxes like "silhouette of shadows" too.
Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI love the line "As they start serenading haunting lullabies" Keep writing
Artemis Reborn 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseIt is so hard to find anyone that you can be comfortable enough to be completely and only yourself around. I've been lucky enough to find that friendship twice. When you do, hang on and don't let go. I made that mistake, and all it does is hurt. Beautiful, moving poem. Sometimes, it's not only others we're afraid to let in, but ourselves, and I love the way you said that. Thank you. Art. (p.s. Don't mind my random ramblings. lol) =)
kloun doll 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseI like the first lines and the idea about being as I'm, it's a good message, there's need to fight to be who you're
Princess-anna57 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOoh ahh great poem. It flows very well. Always remember to just do the best that you can, yup? :) It was so great hearing from you! I miss the days when everyone would be on Fictionpress, now everyone just seems to have left... sigh. No matter what, I will always be on Fictionpress, no doubt about that. Keep writing and posting! :) ~Anna~ ^_^
simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseMaybe I’m ashamed maybe I’m insane... ashamed, maybe I like this piece a lot... the word choice is really awesome "living fullest to obscurity" and the image of the current pulling you... "deceived into iniquity"... great personification with the silhouette and serenading... amazing piece... Th only thing is the last two lines.. I dunno the last line was really nice, but the second to last line just seemed to came out of nowhere... I feel like going from cursed to a cure makes sense, but throwing that other line in there seemed to break up the flow.. Anyhow still a really beautiful and powerful piece PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
silentscreamer07 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseAwesome! I'm so glad you finally posted this one! It really didn't take you too long to write though, did it? I really liked this! You seem to write alot of poems that have a battle going on with some kind of evil..whether its something else..or yourself...and I love that! My fav. lines were "Silhouette of shadows cast their wicked eyes/As they start serenading haunting lullabies" those were striking! Keep writing!!
lisaslife 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseI like it-I have felt this way a few times, especially when I was in high school-I hope you find the strength to be yourself.

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