I think the moral needs to be a bit more blunt at the end. Maybe with some of the dialogue, or adding a little bit more to show that the saint's folly of seeing too much of the world in black & white, or perhaps just that he finds himself on the wrong side of the spectrum from where he thought himself moments earlier.


Some wrong words/missing letters, perhaps from haste of writing it. Just go through it quick and fix those mistakes - such as "we over and they continued to grieve over the death of their lost saint." Sounds like the "we" should be "were;" and then again with "saint stalked the wolf and traced its’ heavy paw prints" traced was meant to be tracked. Minor issues I know, but can help the enjoyment for the reader.