this is AMAZING

I loved this! The desperateness and bluntness of the character was something I was empathizing with throughout the story. Also loved the recurring theme of "onto the rest of my life". It made the end poignant, and perfect. Great job :)

I have/had a coat that I wear/wore everyday like that... It's the green fleece one that looks grey and it has all sorts of crap on it. But mom made me get a new coat cuz she was sick of seeing the green one. It's not exactly hideous, but it's not exactly me, and mom is going to make me wear it.