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Reviews For: Major League Screw Up

Secret-Lives
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseOh... I'm liking it.
eternalx3
2008-05-17
ch 2,
abuseIt looks really good so far. I can't wait until it gets really into the story.
aurora borealis
2008-04-22
ch 2,
abusePromising story. I can't wait to read more. :) (I also absolutely adored "The Best Deceptions".)

Keep up the good work!
MZ PEACHESZZ
2008-04-12
ch 2,
abuseLove the story- you've really progressed in your writing and i'm so excited! This looks great!

Update soon!
Alenor
2008-04-12
ch 2,
abusehmm..interesting, cya later
pinkeclipse
2008-04-11
ch 2,
abusethank you for updating!
pinkeclipse
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseplease continue!
JadeDream
2008-04-11
ch 2,
abuseaww i was looking for another chapter! Update soon i really like this so far!
Roman C Lee
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseYAY! This sounds fun! I can't wait for an update! Uh, I'm sorry to admit that I have no useful con-crit for your proluge--it's great the way it is! So I shouldn't be unhappy about that right? I guess it's a halfy thing; I would lke to be helpful, but who really cares about that if the story's already fantastic? lol ^_^
follow the night light
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuse!!sweet'!
can't wait for the new chappies :D
PJC Macall
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abusevery intrested
give.me.roses
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusegreat start. can't wait for the next chapter to come up =]
Annaface
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseI really like where this is going so far!
Hoodlives
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseGreat start, I’m definitely intrigued! Can’t wait to read more!

:)
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