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LieschenRadieschen 2009-04-13 . chapter 2
loved it. hope you update soon
E. Ardania 2008-11-24 . chapter 2
Sounds like a vacation turned disaster.

Looking forward to see what you've got next!
Secret-Lives 2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Oh... I'm liking it.
eternalx3 2008-05-17 . chapter 2
It looks really good so far. I can't wait until it gets really into the story.
aurora borealis 2008-04-22 . chapter 2
Promising story. I can't wait to read more. :) (I also absolutely adored "The Best Deceptions".)

Keep up the good work!
MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-04-12 . chapter 2
Love the story- you've really progressed in your writing and i'm so excited! This looks great!

Update soon!
Alenor 2008-04-12 . chapter 2
hmm..interesting, cya later
pinkeclipse 2008-04-11 . chapter 2
thank you for updating!
pinkeclipse 2008-04-11 . chapter 1
please continue!
JadeDream 2008-04-11 . chapter 2
aww i was looking for another chapter! Update soon i really like this so far!
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 . chapter 1
YAY! This sounds fun! I can't wait for an update! Uh, I'm sorry to admit that I have no useful con-crit for your proluge--it's great the way it is! So I shouldn't be unhappy about that right? I guess it's a halfy thing; I would lke to be helpful, but who really cares about that if the story's already fantastic? lol ^_^
follow the night light 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
!!sweet'!
can't wait for the new chappies :D
PJC Macall 2008-03-18 . chapter 1
very intrested
give.me.roses 2008-03-07 . chapter 1
great start. can't wait for the next chapter to come up =]
Annaface 2008-02-26 . chapter 1
I really like where this is going so far!
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