loved it. hope you update soon

Sounds like a vacation turned disaster.

Looking forward to see what you've got next!

Oh... I'm liking it.

It looks really good so far. I can't wait until it gets really into the story.

Promising story. I can't wait to read more. :) (I also absolutely adored "The Best Deceptions".)

Keep up the good work!

Love the story- you've really progressed in your writing and i'm so excited! This looks great!

Update soon!

hmm..interesting, cya later

thank you for updating!

please continue!

aww i was looking for another chapter! Update soon i really like this so far!

YAY! This sounds fun! I can't wait for an update! Uh, I'm sorry to admit that I have no useful con-crit for your proluge--it's great the way it is! So I shouldn't be unhappy about that right? I guess it's a halfy thing; I would lke to be helpful, but who really cares about that if the story's already fantastic? lol ^_^

!!sweet'!
can't wait for the new chappies :D

very intrested

great start. can't wait for the next chapter to come up =]

I really like where this is going so far!