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Basara
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abusetradegy of sort in a inner gleam of hope...

nice...
Illastic
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseAh, a good ending.

I can imagine a sad, weather-beaten statue at the end of a dock...
fleur de l'est
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseDramatic and creates great imagery. Great job! I like the way you left the ending vague so that the reader and relate the poem to herself =)
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