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| R. M. Kent 2008-04-16 ch 12, | abuseI'm glad things are moving along with the dashing Adrien. 'so not like where she grew up in' I didn't really like this turn of phrase. Just a small thing. Maybe 'and nto at all like where she had grown up'? I don't know. Like i say, just a small thing. |
| Not Quite Right in the Head 2008-04-08 ch 11, | abuseYour writing style is very good and fits the time period well. |
| R. M. Kent 2008-04-05 ch 11, | abuseIs it crazy that I like Ferdinand? Looking forward to see how he is part of Renee's story. |
| R. M. Kent 2008-03-14 ch 7, | abuseI'm really enjoying the story. I loved this final chapter with the theif, because of the outsiders view. And the first chapter really drew me in. I can't wait to see what happens to Renee and how she discovers all about herself. I think the storyline is so interesting and different. |