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Volurin 2008-05-16 ch 2,	abuseSup, Tecna. This story sounds interesting so far, yeah. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Hope you're having fun at college, 'cause I know I'm not (at high school). Later, yeah.
crazystar0 2008-04-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseAAw!! u dedicated it too mme! :D:D:D:D hehe.. Sorry i dint review earlier.. i dont have a computer etc.etc... The story it self is vveerryy discriptive.. The storys BRILLIANT!! I want an update - ill give you a deal - for every update that u post up, ill give u back one of the books that i have :D
Alice 2008-04-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseI think you have a good start for a wonderful story. A little more description would be nice, but I really like it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! Love, Alice 8]
Fleeting Moment 2008-04-06 ch 2,	abuseThis is really good! UPDATE!
FireFallon 2008-04-06 ch 2,	abusehaha yes! oh, hell no has to be my favorite line ever! update soon
FunkyFlower16 2008-04-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseholy smokes! this chapter was absolutely brilliant ;) and the girls are so Daring! loved the comebacks you included in this. and the way the girls won the sparring, man, that was awesome ;)) i just dont know what to say! its just great ;) YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! you've got me hooked on this fic now, lol mez x
FunkyFlower16 2008-04-06 ch 1, anon.	abuselol, so lazy that i cant be asked to sign in. i love the fic tho ;) sorry i didnt review it earlier. i had started reading it be4 you know, but i only got through half of it. but nvmd, its all come back to me now ;) i really love the way you merged the 2 pov's together, and it's great so far :D dont worry about how you ended it, it seems ok to me. not too abrupt, but it leaves a bit of suspense too. suspense is good ;) lol ok, on to the next chap... mez x
misery sister 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D
crazystar0 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseFirst of all, im writing this as i read along..soo yeah I think the summary is full of suspence so its good... Dont change it yeah? Oh BTW, im your firt reviwer arn't i? :D:D:D:D:D.. Ok time to read... Why were you disapointed with your first effort? I thought it was brilliant!! Ok.. First off, the begenning makes me remeber a story that ive alredy read on fictionpres..You might wann try changing it a bit.. About the Authers note half way through - Technically its not you offending guys, its your character.. its allowed to happen! (hehehe that was an evil hint...) So far.. WICKED WICKED WICKED!! Love it! I just realised - YAY!! You used the names i told you to! - well for the girls anyway... The guys one dont sound too bad though.. Hhehehe.. They have swipe cards...Like QE? You should have made it go 'Bee Bop' first time round... Woah!! I want a room like thires! So far, it sounds like a VERY promising story. I will personally have your throat if you do not update. I MEAN IT. For once, i want to read a finished story from you... Did i tell you it sonds like a wiked story? Yes? ahem ok.. :D:D:D:D:D:D YOU HAD BETTER UPDATE IT! Or ill harass you :) Cya in Collejj ... Where ill see you writing the next chapter... :D

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