nice usage of enjambments. I like it, straight to the point and each line could be read a little differently.

Interesting. How do you "always relied," but only "almost depended?" It doesn't make a lot of sense. Now, the "you" and "she" are they two different people or are they the same. If they're the same you might want to stick to one or the other. If they're different, you might want to decipher between them better. I loved the feel of the poem, the line "You were skinny and strung out," and the last line, "Before the shadows towered over you." The poem makes you feel guilty, stressed, worn out and sad all in a few lines. That was awesome. And I really liked this.

THIS WAS REAL DEEP AND I LOVE IT..