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Itsuyaya
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseThat's so sad...
soaring glass
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful and heart wrenching. You've packed more emotion in a few short lines then most people do in entire stories. It's extraordinary and it hurts too. wonderful.
bleepbloopbanana
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseA rather touching drabble, and I think it could be more effective if you either seperated the large paragraph in the beginning, or just shortened it.

But other than that, I think this is the first time I've read angst from you, and it made me sigh. I hate angst, really, especially when it ends in death, but even I can't argue how emotive this was. Simple, to the point, but packed with a lot of emotion.

Good work. -sniff-

Bleep
SummerLover
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseWell...I don't really get it, but the title and the single paragraph lines are super inpiring! I kind of am in love with this so good job!
Paperclippe
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseOh, my god, this is beautiful. I was almost in tears, in only two hundred or so words. I love it.
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