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| Itsuyaya 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad... |
| soaring glass 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful and heart wrenching. You've packed more emotion in a few short lines then most people do in entire stories. It's extraordinary and it hurts too. wonderful. |
| bleepbloopbanana 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseA rather touching drabble, and I think it could be more effective if you either seperated the large paragraph in the beginning, or just shortened it. But other than that, I think this is the first time I've read angst from you, and it made me sigh. I hate angst, really, especially when it ends in death, but even I can't argue how emotive this was. Simple, to the point, but packed with a lot of emotion. Good work. -sniff- Bleep |
| SummerLover 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWell...I don't really get it, but the title and the single paragraph lines are super inpiring! I kind of am in love with this so good job! |
| Paperclippe 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, my god, this is beautiful. I was almost in tears, in only two hundred or so words. I love it. |