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| iB3ck 2008-04-05 ch 3, anon. | abusewow u rock this story is really good, i was a bit confused in chapter 1 with the moods off the chracters changing so fast but everything seemed to flow better with the rest of the story. keep writting/typing^_^ |
| yoko oh no 2008-02-29 ch 2, anon. | abusem i hope they arent this age forever... cuz... yeah... it sounds like a prolouge but i like it =] |
| atty471 2008-02-29 ch 2,  | abusehm this is interesting... update soon. bark bark. =] |
| atty471 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusehm seems interesting... im caught by your words. update asap. okay? |
| talenyn tears 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseoh! you did update! haha! i love this story so far. and i like how you update so fast! keep up the good work! |
| talenyn tears 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseaw this is very cute. i like your writing style. keep up the good work |
| winter44 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseOMG!! I like this story! i wanna know what happens next! haha |
| KT Aurora 2008-02-28 ch 2, | abuseIt seems AMAZING so far! =] I love it! |
| winter44 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abusehaha i like this story. better editing than the first draft. keep up the good work! |
| misschloe 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abusepretty cool...keep writing... |