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| Carousel Chorus 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. Amazing! I love the imagery. *favs* x.CC |
| kelsi bones 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuse"but you see I am so forgettable that there is no future with her and I know it" Story of my life. Sorry it has to be the story of yours too. I love this piece. I'm definitely adding it to my favorites =] k.X |
| HelpWanted11 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI really love this piece. It seems so real and overpowering in a way. If that makes any sense. The first stanza is intriguing and it's a good foundation for the rest of this piece. I like the way it transitions into the second stanza. Anyway, you get the point. Keep writing, HelpWanted11 |