Wow. Amazing! I love the imagery.
*favs*
x.CC

"but you see
I am so forgettable
that there is no future with her
and I know it"

Story of my life. Sorry it has to be the story of yours too.

I love this piece. I'm definitely adding it to my favorites =]

k.X

I really love this piece. It seems so real and overpowering in a way. If that makes any sense. The first stanza is intriguing and it's a good foundation for the rest of this piece. I like the way it transitions into the second stanza. Anyway, you get the point.

Keep writing,
HelpWanted11