This is cute. It seems realistic, and it's somehow sad & happy at once. )

don't know why. but i really love it.

adding to favs.

hm... i don't mind the not capitalizing. and i like the simple hidden messages within things. it's actually a pretty good style. good job on the poem. it was short, simple, and sweet, but the point was still put across. good job!

sad ending.. I like it a lot and I can relate to it as well.. it flows really nicely and I like the format... one thing the second to last line seemed to disrupt the flow with the line length

this is adorable. Great job.