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| Lurid Black 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseWow! This one is... brilliant! Dialogue, mixed in with an emotional poem, this would be one of my favourites... |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really beautiful. I really like how the story is told. a couple lines, though, broke the flow a bit. For example the line "of course, you don't have to ask." i think it could be shortened to maybe "of course i will." or something. But nice job on this. :) |