I look through a window/Of a family I hardly knew... the windiow isn't of your family. That just sounds odd. Maybe inside is a family...

I think for a first poem this is really great. The whole window metaphor is good, but it is a bit cliched. The other thing for future poems is the line lengths were all over the place, but definitely post more poems if you write them. If you want help I'm a Beta or you can look up other Betas or maybe check out the Review Game forum.